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[color=rgb(209,]ABHI ----- THE WARRIOR[/color]

[color=rgb(61,]Dosto Yeh kahani hai ek aise yodha ki jisko kalug mein iss srihsti k santulan ka baar saupa gaya hai.

yeh puri tarah kalpanik hai

Friends mein koi writer nahi hu isiliye galtiya toh hogi , unko najarandaj karke
kahani ka aanand uthaye

yeh meri pahli kahani hai , friends aap apna saath banaye rakhe

Humari duniya badi rahsyamayi hai, iss poore brahmand mein 14 lok hai

prithvi se upar 7 lok

भूलोक, भुवलोक , स्वर्गलोक, महर्लोक, जनलोक , तपलोक और[/color][color=rgb(41,]सत्यलोक

Aur prithvi k niche 7 lok,

तललोक, अतललोक, वितल, सुतललोक, तलातल, रसातल और पाताललोक

इस ब्रह्मांड का रक्षक वो ही बन सकता है , जिसके पास इन 14 लोको की शक्तियां हो

इन 14 लोको मे कुछ स्थुललोक है कुछ सूक्ष्म

स्थूल का मतलब जिन्हे हम आंखो से देख सकते है
और सूक्ष्मलोक वह जिन्हे केवल दिव्य दृष्टी से और सिद्धियो से देखा जा सकता है

इन 14लोको से उपर 3 लोक और है

ब्रह्मलोक, वैकुण्ठलोक , शिवलोक जो इस सारी सृष्टी का संचालन करते है[/color]

[color=rgb(255,]★[/color] [color=rgb(41,]INDEX[/color] [color=rgb(255,]★[/color]


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[color=rgb(61,]Update 1[/color]

[color=rgb(41,]अब आते है कहानी पर---------
Roopnagar k ek hospital k Operation theter ek bahar 4 log intezar kar rahe the, sab ki aankon mein aansoo the, unn k chehro ko dekhkar lagta hai ki koi unka apna Operation thetor mein maut se lad raha hai

unme ek 22 saal ki ladki ki toh haalat aisi hai k baar baar rote rote behosh ho rahi hai aur 45 saal k lagbhag ek aurat aur 55 k karib ek aadmi usse sambhalne mein lage hai aur unke saath khada tha koi 20 saal ka yuvak jo apne dukh ko dil mein dabaye intejar kar raha tha

aurat -- ladki se --- beta uth jaa na, kyu aisa kar rahi hai, dekh tu bhi aise karegi toh hum kya karenge kuch nahi hoga hamare abhi ko, uth jaa naa laado apne bhai ki khatir , agar tuzhe kuch hua toh hum abhi ko kaise sambhalenge, uth jaa na Ritu[/color]

[color=rgb(61,]Haa yeh hamare hero ki family hai

Short intro -----

Rana Vikram singh -- age 60 Hero's dad, lekin dikne mein 40 k lagte hai
yeh Roopnagar k raja , India k top most business man hai

Naina devi -- hero's mom 45 yrs , ekdum rajsi look aur chehre par ek alag tej

Ritika singh --- badi behan 22yrs bhut hi beautiful, bilkul apni maa ki tarah isski jaan apne bhai mein basti hai

Adira singh --- Choti behan abhi hostel mein padti hai bahut hi cute aur bachpane se bharpur

aur jo ladka hai woh Rakesh sharma hero ka frnd hai

yeh ek chotta intro tha poora intro Hero ki jubani milega

Yaha ritu ki haalat bigati jaa rahi thi
(ab naina devi ko maa kahunga)

maa -- dekho meri beti bhi dur jaa rahi hai agar isse kuch ho gaya toh sab khatam ho jaayega jaldi doctor ko bulaaeye

rakesh doctor ko bulane chala jaata hai

maa - itna kuch ho gaya aur aap but bankar khade ho, na kuch bolte ho na kuch kar rahe ho, kya itne patthar dil ho.

apne patni ki baatein sunkar Vikarm singh k dhyra ka baand tut gaya aur rote hue bolne laga

R.V.S -- naina muzhe kuch samz nahi aaraha hai kya karu , ek taraf toh mera abhi maut se lad raha hai, aur dusri taraf ritu ki aisi haalat aur ab toh Adira ko bhi sambhalna padega kyu ki woh aarahi hai,

maa -- aap usse rok lo yaha aane se nahi toh pata nahi kya ho jaayega

R.V.S -- Kaise roku kal 2 din se uski ph par abhi se baat nahi hui aur tum jaanti ho ,abhi se baat kiye bagair woh nahi rah sakti
tabhi Rakesh doctor ko leke aagaya ,Ritu ko check karke ICU mein le gaye

operation chalte hue 4 ghante ho gaye the ,aur teeno intezhar kar rahe the apne pyare abhi k wapas lautne kaa .....[/color]

[color=rgb(61,]agla update jald hi......[/color]
 
[color=rgb(41,]Update -- 2[/color]

[color=rgb(41,]Abhi tak aapne dekha hero ka operation chal raha hai ........ ab aage[/color]
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R.V.S ne dekha operation thetor ka light band ho hua , sabhi ka dhyan uski taraf hi tha, tabhi Doc ko bahar aate dekha toh teeno docter k paas pahuch gaya , doctor ne R.V.S aankon hi aanko mein ishara kake alag bulaya

R.V.S -- kya hua doc sab mera beta kaisa hai ab, chahe jo bhi karo kisi specialist ko bulana hai toh bulao mera beta thik hona chahiye doc
(itna kahkar aanko se aansoo nikal pade)
Doc -- dhyray rakhe Rana sahab , hum puri koshish ka rahe hai , aapka beta ki will ppower hairan karnewali hai 12 goli lagne k baad bhi aur 1goli dil mein lagne par bhi woh jeevan se haar nahi man raha humne saari goliya nikal di, ab dekhte hai kya hota hai
R.V.S -- Kab tak hosh aajaayega usse

Doc -- abhi kuch kah nahi sakte, 24 hrs bahut critical hai

maa se raha nahi gaya aur woh bhi doc k paas aakar puchne lagi

Maa -- kya hua doc , kya kah rahe hai mera beta thik toh ho jaayega na , agar usse kuch ho gaya toh, tum jaante ho kya hoga
(itna kahkar maa jor jor se rone lagi, aankein puri lal ho gayi R.V.S ne kuch anarth ki aashanka se usse gale laga liye aur shant karne lage , aise hi gale lage rote rote maa behosh ho gayi)
maa ko ek chair par bitha kar Rakesh se bole
R.V.S -- Suno beta jara ritu ko bhi dekh aao kaisi hai tab tak mein yaha dekhta hu
Rakesh -- Uncle meri doc se baat ho gayi hai , di abhi behosh hai weakness ki wajah se ,jaldi thik ho jaayegi

R.V.S -- Tumhe pata hai kaun the woh log jinhone yeh kiya hai

Rakesh -- Uncle jab mein waha pahuncha tab woh log wha se nikal rahe the , unka picha karna chahta tha lekin wha abhi ki aisi haalat aur ritu di ka rona dekhkar mein unhe yaha le aaya
R.V.S -- koi baat nahi beta, aaj mein tumahara karjdar hogaya kis muh se tumahara shukriya karu beta.
ab mein dekhlunga unko jinki maut ab koi nahi rok sakta

itna kahkar R.V.S I.G ko ph lagate hai

yaha Rakesh mann mein( uncle aap se pahele mein unko aisi maut dunga ki dekhne walo ki ruh kaaph jaayegi) aur
usski aanko se aag nikalne lagi jaise garam lava ho , lekin jaldi hi usne apne upar control kar liya

yaha ph par IG se
R.V.S -- IG sahab jadli se pata kijiye unka nahi toh aap ko pata hai mein kya kya kar sakta hu
IG -- Rana sahab aap chinta mat kariye, abhi mein aapka hi kaam kar raha hu jaldi hi pata lag jaayega

yha maa ko bhi hosh aagaya , ritu ko bhi alag room mein shift kar diya tha.
teeno ne hero ko icu k bahar lage shise se dekha toh dil mein ek tees uthi abhi ka hasta muskurata chehra aankon k saamne aaya
ab teeno ritu k room mein uske hosh aane ka intejar kar rahe the
ki achanak ek chikh gunji ...........
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[color=rgb(41,]next update soon[/color]
 
[color=rgb(41,] Update -- 3[/color]

[color=rgb(41,]ab tak aapne dekha hero ka opretion ho gaya hai ........ aur R.V.S , Naina aur Rakesh teeno Ritu k paas baithe hai.... ab aage.....[/color]

[color=rgb(41,]Achanak Ritu chikhte hue uthi ... Nahi ... Abhi ko chod do usse kuch mat karo ... aur idhar udhar dekhkar jor jor se rone lagi .. abhi beti ka aisa haal dekhkar dono mata pita k aanko mein aaso aa gaye[/color]

Naina ne aage badkar gale laga liya aur pyar se sir par haath pherte hue boli

Naina -- Beti chup ho jaao kuch nahi hoga hamare Abhi ko , shaant ho jaa beta hamahra pyar aur vishwas Abhi ko kuch nahi hone dega

maa aisi hi hoti hai ek taraf toh bete ki haalat dekhkar dil ghabra raha hai aur dusri tarf apne dil ka dard chupa kar beti ke dukh ko kam kar rahi hai

R.V.S -- Ritu k sir par pyar se haath pherte hue ---

Beta Ritu chup ho meri Gudiya , dekh tu toh meri pyari beti hai aise himmat haaregi toh kaise chalega, Doc se meri baat ho gayi hai beta , Kal tak abhi ko hosh aajayega

R.V.S ka mann saari baatein ritu se puchne ka mann ka raha tha lekin beti ki aisi haalat dekhkar puch na paaya
Aur Rakesh jaane kaha khoya hua tha kya soch raha tha

ph k ring ki aawaj sunkar Rakesh ka dhyan uss tarf gaya, toh dekha Rana sahab ka ph par call aarahi thi, call dekhkkar R.V.S bahar aaye aur call pick karke bolne lage aur yaha Rakesh ne bhi apni shravan shakti uss aur laga di
R.V.S -- Haa bolo IG kya khabar hai

IG -- Rana sahab humne pata kar liya hai , jaha yeh ghatna hui waha ki cctv footage se kuch jaankaari haasil hui

R.V.S -- Kaun the woh log

IG --- Sir hamlawar k muh dhake hue the , lekin unki gaadi ka number mil gaya hai,

R.V.S -- Kiski hai woh gaadi pata kiya

IG - Sir gaadi toh MLA Raghav ki hai , lekin unhone uski chori hone ki complaint 4 din pahele ki thi
sir lagta hai yeh hamla preplanned tha koi gahri saazish lagti hai, jald hi apradhi aapke saamne hoga

call khatam hote hi woh wapas room mein aaye ,Rakesh kuch sochte hue bola -- Uncle muzhe kuch bahut jaaruri kaam hai , agar aapki izzazat ho toh ho aau

R.V.S -- arre beta issme puchne wali kaunsi baat hai ,tu bhi kal se yahi hai

Rakesh -- Thik hai uncle , mein jaldi hi aajaaunga , aur uncle aap logo ne kal se kuch khaaya nahi hai , yadi aap muzhe apna beta maate hai toh toh Aunty aur Ritu di ko kuch khila dijiye aur aap bhi kuch kha lijiye

itna kahkar Woh bahar chala gaya

Ritu -- Papa muzhe Abhi ko dekhna hai muzhe waha le chaliye

R.V.S -- nahi beta hum abhi uss room mein nahi jaa sakte ,

Ritu -- nahi papa muzhe dekhna hai mere bhai ko , bahar se hi dekh lungi

R.V.S -- Thik hai beta lekin tumhe kasam hai abhi ki k uske baad tumhe kuch khakar aaram kana hoga, nahi toh abhi jab hosh mein aayega aur tumhe iss haal mein dekhega toh usspar kya bitegi
naina tum nurse ko saath lekar Ritu ko le jaao mein canteen se hokar aata hu

ab tak Rana ne yeh baat bahar nahi jaane di lekin na jaane kaise media ko baat pata chal gayi, Jaise Rana saahab caanteen ki aur jaane lage waha lage tv par yeh news chalne lagi
Desh k top business man Rana Vikram Singh k bete par jaanlewa humla ....

Aur hospital k bahar media walo gadiyo ki kataar badti jaa rahi

jis Baat ka dar tha wahi hua ab saare rishtedaro k call pe call aane lage, R.V.S yn sabko jawab dete dete pareshan hogaya toh ph silent mode par kar diya

inn sabko ko yahi chodkar dekhte hai hero ka haal

Ek safed prakash se paripurna manav aakriti kisi aisi jagah jaa rahi thi jaha chaaro taraf divyata ka vatavaran tha
woh manav aakrti yani k Rana Abhinav Singh matlab hamara hero Abhi
ab abhi ko mein likhunga

aaj muzhe aisa mehsus ho raha hai ki jaise mein mukt hu na koi bhav hai na vichar...na koi takleef , lag raha hai jaise asim aanand aur shakti ka srot mein hu ,

ek taraf hospital mein rakha mera sharir aur dusri taraf mein ......sab kuch dekh raha hu lekin koi bhav nahi najaane yeh kaisi stithi hai ....badh chala hu mein na jaane kis manzil ki or

chaaro taraf kamal k pushpo ki sugandh thi.... jab meine dekha toh ek vishal saagar k madhya mein khada tha ... jiska jal dudh jaisa tha....muzhe ashcharya hua ki mein toh waha hospital mein tha ......toh yaha kaise , kaha hu

kaise mein paani par khada hu kuch samaz nahi aa raha tha.

tabhi waha ek aawaj gunji itne pareshan kyu ho putra aao miane hi tumhe yaha bulaya hai

jab maine dekha toh saamne ek bada se safed kamal pushp pragat hua aur uspar baithe hue safed prakash se bharpur ek divya vibhuti

meine jab unka darshan kiya toh dekha unke 4 sir the aur char haath safed divya vastra tab muzhe dhyan aaya k yeh chavi toh Brahma ji ki hai mein yaha kaise kahi yeh sapna toh nahi yaa maar toh nahi gaya tabhi unki aawaj aayi

Brahma ji -- Sahi pehchana putra iss samay tum Brahmalok mein ho aur abhi tum mrityu ko prapt nahi hue ho putra,

mein -- Pranam parampita aapko shat shat naman . Hey shristikarta mera sharir toh prithivi par hai toh phir mein yaha kaise mere aaprado ko kshama karna prabhu aapse prashn puch raha hu

Brahma ji - Putra jo dharti par hai woh tumahara haad maas ka bana hua sthool sharir hai aur yaha jo hai woh sukshma sharir hai jo keval urja se bana hai .......

agla Update jald hi
 
[color=rgb(41,] Update - 4

ab tak aapne dekha......... hero ka sukshma sharir Bramhalok mein hai....aur ab aage ..........

Mein yeh soch raha tha ki yeh sab ky chakkar hai aur yeh suksma sharir kya hai , tabhi ...

Bramha ji :- Beta har vyakti k 3 sharir hote hai
sthool sharir... jo 5 tatv
( elements ) ka bana hota hai,

Dusra sukshma sharir yeh yeh indriyo ki urja, antarman aur kundlishakti se banna hua hai

Teesra kaaran sharir jo karmo k faal se banta bigadta hai hai

mein - yeh parampita aap toh iss shrishti k nirman karte hai , toh phir muzh jaise ek sadharan manav ko yaha aane ka saubhagya kaise prapt hua, kyuki jaha tak maine suna hai aap tridev k darshan toh devtao ko bhi durlabh hai, phir mera jaisa ek bahut hi sadharan manav par yeh kripa kyu

Bramha ji -- Putr tum yaha ho ,isse jan lo ki tum koi sadharan nahi ho,
tum hum tridevo k ansh se banne ho,
tum har kaliyug mein bramhand k rakshak ho putra

Mein - Rakshak aur mein ....kaise prabhu ..mein toh kuch gundo ka bhi saamna nahi kar paaya ....toh phir rakshak kaise

Bramha ji - Putra tum apni shaktiyo ko jagrit karo ab samay aagaya hai , putra

itna kah kar unke haato mein rakhe ved se ek prakash nikla aur mere bhitar samane laga, muzhe mere bhitar anneko ved mantra gunjte hue se mahsus hue, aur unn mantro se utpan honewali urja ko mein mahsus kar raha tha, ek divyata ka anbhav

Brahma ji -Putra ab isse aage ka raasta tumahare guru batayenge

mein - Parantu prabhu mere sharir ki aisi haalat..

Brahma ji -- kuch nahi hua putr , tum bilkul swastha ho , jab tumhe tumahare pranshakti ki dharak sparsh karegi , tab tumhe chetna aajaayege
aur tum iss yatra ko bhul jaaoge sirf mera diya hua vedo ka gyan hi jagrit hoga

jab tum apne swarup aur shaktio ko paa loge tabhi hum tridevo ko apne bhitar paaoge
yashshvi buav putra ..
.ab mein vaha mere samne se brahma lok ka drishya adrishya ho ho gaya aur prkashrup ho gaya aur chal pada apni manjil ki aur

ab muzhe dikh raha hai hospital mein pada mera sharir aur usse dekhte hi saari bhavnaye aur yaadein meri jagrit ho gayi

tabhi muzhe kiski dard bhari pukar sunai di k jaise koi muzhe pukaar raha hai..... uss pukar ki taraf jaise hi mera dhyan gaya toh pahuch gaya ek room mein waha maine dekha ek bed par meri Ritu di baithi hai unko dekhte hi muzhe ek dard ka ahsas hua

Di aankhien band kar k baithi hui hai unke gaalo par sukh chuke aansoon k nishan dikh rahe hai , aur band aankon se bhi aansoo bah rahe hai ,

di k dil ki pukar muzhe sunai de rahi hai ( uth jaa na bhai dekh tere bina tere di ka kya haal ho gaya hai betu, agar aaj tu nahi utha toh mein iss duniya se hi uth jaaungi.. meri wajah se hi yeh sab hua hai ...jab tu hi nahi rahega toh mei jee kar kya karungi)

Di ka yeh dard muzhse saha nahi jaa raha tha mein unhe batana chahta tha lekin mein kuch kar nahi paa raha tha

tab maine apne aapko shaant kiya aur di ko mann mein pukara

mein -- Di aap se dur hoke kaha jaa sakta hu mein , muzhe kuch nahi hua di ....tumhe aisi haalat mein nahi dekh sakta di chup ho jaao.... ab mein aagaya hu .. lekin muzhe apni di ka wahi khilta hua chehra dekhna hai

di ko apne dil mein meri aawaj sunai deti hai woh aankein khol kar chaaro taraf dekhti hai

Ritu - betu kaha hai tu .....kyu chup raha hai...betu saamne aaja na

di ki aawaj wah baithi maa sun leti hai

Maa - kya hua beta ..kisko pukar rahi hai

maa ki aawaj sunkar mera dhyan unki taraf gaya toh dekha unki aankhein bhi ro rokar lal ho gayi hai muzhe unke dil mein chupa hua dard dikhayi dene laga , dil mein mamta ka saagar aur mera thik hone ki niranter bhagwan ki prarthana dekh kar mera man unko gale lagane ka hua ..lekin mein abhi asamarth tha

Ritu di -- maa abhi Betu ne muzhse baat ki woh aanewala hai maa....bhai thik ho gay hai maa ...itna kah kar di washroom mein chali gayi

ab mein papa ko dhundne laga toh dekha woh waiting room mein meri puri family se ghire hue hai ..sab aaye hai Dada, dadi ... Nana ,nani dono bua ki family , Mama mausi sab rishtedar aur papa apne dil ka dard chupakar unko saari sthiti bata rahe the

ki tabhi waha par kisi ki aawaj aayi
papa ....... jab mera dhyan uss taraf gaya toh dekha meri jaan jisme basti hai .. mere dil ka tukda ...meri chotti behan ...Adira

Duad kar aai aur papa k gale lagkar rone lagi ...ussko rote dekhkar sabke aankon mein aanso aagaye aur papa bhi apne aap ko nahi rok paaye

Papa -- Chup ho jaao meri gudiya

Adira -- Papa aap bahut bure ho ....itna kuch ho gaya aapne muzhe bataya nahi ..maine bhai ko ph karne ki bahut koshish ki lekin meri baat nahi hui ..aur pata nahi kyu muzhe bar bar rona aaraha tha,tab maine yaha aane ka socha ... aur jab mein ghar gayi toh waha koi nahi tha .....shankar kaka ne kaha ki sab bahar gaye hai unhone bhi kuch nahi bataya .....lekin jab maine tv par news dekhi toh sab pata chala

aur woh jor jor se rone lagi , uska dard dekhkar mein bhi dard se tadaf utha

Adira -- Papa muzhe abhi le chalo bhai k paas muzhe abhi dekhna hai bhai ko

Papa - Beta dekho abhi wo ICU mein hai hum usse sirf bahar se dekh sakte hai

Adira - mein kuch nahi jaanti papa muzhe abhi bhai se milna hai aap kuch bhi karo
yeh kahkar woh jor jor se rone lagi

apne dil k tudkde ki aisi haalat dekhkar R.V.S ne doc se baat ki aur badi mushkil se srif ek ko jaane ki permission mili

papa Adira ko lekar ICU ki taraf chal pade waha jaakar dekha toh maa aur Ritu di bhi ICU k bahar mili Adira ko lekin sirf apne bhai ko dekhne ki jaldi thi iss pahele maa aur di kuch kahti doc ne ICU ka door khol diya aur Adira turant ander chali gayi aur saath hi saath mein bhi sukshma rup se bhiter gaya, aur ander apne sharir ko dekhne laga jaha oxigen cylender laga hua tha aur saline se koi dawa meri andar pahuchayi jaa rahi thi kuch machine bhi lagi hui thi jo awaj se mere jivit hone ka praman de rahi thi

Meri aisi haalat dekhkar Chotti ki aankon se aansu bah nikle , aur kahne lagi

Adira -- Uth jaao na bhai dekho aapki gudiya aapko pukar rahi hai, aapne muzhse roj baat karne ka waada kiya tha utho na bhai ...ab mein aapse koi jid nahi karungi .. bhai agar aap aaj nahi uthe toh mein bhi aaj k baad kisi se baat nahi karungi

itna kahte hue wih aage badi aur mera haath pakad liya...... jaise hi gudiya ne mera haath pakda gudiya ki aankon se white roshni nikalne lagi .... aur woh safed urja uske haato k jariye mere bhitar jaa rahi thi

bahar se mom, dad aur di glass mein se dekh rahe the lekin unhe woh prakash nazar nahi aaya

achanak muzhe aaisa laga jaise muzhe apne sharir mein koi shakti khich rahi hai aur mein prevesh kar gaya apne sharir mein

Gudiya ne mehsus kiya ki mera haath hil raha hai toh uski pakd aur majbut ho gayi aur bhai bhai karke pukarne lagi.

tabhi dhere dhere meri aankien khula aur mera muh se nikla .....gudiya

abhi k liye itna hi ..... next update soon[/color]
 
[color=rgb(41,]Update - 5

ab tak aapne dekha ....adira k chunne se hero ka sukshma sharir wapas uske sharir mein aajaata hai....... aur hero ki aankhein khulti hai..... ab aage[/color]

[color=rgb(41,]Mein - Gudiya .... mera baccha

Meri aawaj sunkar woh mere gale lagkar rone lagi
Adira - bhayia ..aap bahut bure ho aap apni gudiya ko chod kar jaa rahe the na
mein - nahi meri pyari aadu mein kaise tumko chod kar jaa sakta hu
aur mein pyar se uske sir par haath pherne laga
yaha bahar khade mom ,dad aur di ne muzhe hosh mein aate hue aur gudiya se baat karte dekha
dad ne fauran paas khade doc ko aawaj dekar bulaya , aur teeno doc k saath ander aagaye
ander aate hi doc ne machines check ki toh sab normal dekhkar hairan ho gaya .
mom aur di muzhe hosh mein dekhkar bahut khush huye aur unki aankon se khusi k aanso nikal ne

yeh aanso bhi ajab chij hai, gum ho yaa khushi, bahar aane ko tayyar rahete hai

tabhi di ne pyar se mere sir par haath rakha toh unka mere liye pyar dekhkar mere aankon mein bhi aansoo aagaye

Ritu di - Mat ro betu dekhab tu jadi thik ho jaayega, tune muzhe toh rone k liye mana kiya tha aur ab tu khud ro raha hai
muzhe kuch samaz nahi aaraha tha ki di kya kah rahi hai, kyu ki mein suksma shari dwara dekha gaya sab kuch bhul gaya tha

mom ne aage badh k mere aanson poche Addu bahi tak mere upar gale lagi hui sisak rahi thi
jaise agar woh chod degi toh mein kahi chala jaaunga

Doc - Rana sahab abhi aap isse akela chod de please, abhi hume inko check-up karna hai , phir inhe room mein shift karna hai, waha aap sab mil sakte ho

papa meri taraf dekh rahe the apne dil ka dard dil mein chupaaye, aur mera sir par unhone ne haath rakha , aur bole ...... mera pyara bahadur beta in choti moti choto se Hamare khoon ko kuch nahi ho sakta ....bete abhi toh bahut lambi ladayi hai

maa - kya ji aap abhi mera beta hosh mein aaya aur aap ladayi ki baat lekar baith gaye, kahi nahi jaane dungi apne lal ko kahkar ....apne aanchal se mero muh saaf karne lagi ..... maa ke aanchal ki woh divya sugandh ne mere sharir ko ek aaram sa mila.....aurmuzhe achanak nind si aagayi

maa - doc dekho na ky hua phir se

doc - kuch nahi maa ji abhi patient ko aaram ki jarurat hai

papa - beta addu chod do ab bhai ko dekho unko aaram ki jarurat hai, tum chati ho na ki tumahara bhai jaldi thik ho jaaye

Adira(addu) - lekin papa mein bhi bhai k ......

papa - lekin vekin kuch nahi , kya tum apne bhai ko takleef dena chahti ho

itna sunte hi addu uth gayi....
nahi papa mein bhai ko kaise taklif pahucha sakti hu.... aap jo bologe mein woh karungi
phir sab bahar aagaye , aur doc ne muzhe check karna shuru kiya , toh woh hairaan rah gaye

doc - Nahi yeh nahi ho sakta, its impossible, its really a miracle ...kaise ho sakta hai yeh

assistant - kya hua sir kya nahi ho sakta

doc - idhar dekho iss patient ke saare ghav apne aap kaise bhar gaye ,aur operation ka nisshan kaha gaya

assis - haa sir yeh toh unbealivable hai
doc - ek baat dhyan rahe yeh baat bahar nahi naikalni chahiye , nahi toh kai sawal khade ho jaayenge

assis - ji sir jaisa aap kahe

ab muzhe ek bade se room mein shift kar diya gaya , yeh ek bada room tha kyu ki doc ko pata tha ki visitors ki list bahut lambi hai

aur mein yaha sapne mein ek golden color k room mein apne aap ko dekgta hu jaha vedo k mantra gunj rahe hai
aur dheere dheere woh mantra mere buddhi mein apni jagah bana rahe hai ...mein unki urja mehsus kar raha hu

jaise hi mantra dhwani ruki ek aawaj gunji aaj k liye itna hi putr

aur phir meri aankhein khul gayi aur maine aapne aapko ek room mein paaya mera sir maa ki godi mein tha aur woh pyar se muzhe hi dekh rahi thi , muzhe hosh mein aate dekhkar unke chehre par muskurahat aagayi

meri gudiya aur di bhi muzhe utha dekhkar khushi se gale lag gayi .
aur bhi bhi sapne ki baato mein khoya hua tha , muzhe ander ek nayi urja ka ahsas ho raha tha , mere mastishk mein kai mantro ka aabhas hone laga abhi mein soch hi raha tha ki yeh mantra mere bhitar kaha se aaye to gudiya ne muzhe hilaye

addu - bhai kaha kho gaye ho mein aapse kuch bol rahi hu...

Mein - mein sun raha hu betu kya bol rahi ho

addu - bhai ab mein hostel nahi jaaungi , aapko chodkar kahi nahi jaaungi,

mein - dekh betu aise jid nahi karte

addu - nahi bhai muzhe aur kuch nahi chahiye ,muzhe sirf aap chahiye

itna kah kar woh rone lagi
mein - chup jo jaa betu mat ro, thik hai jo tu kahegi wahi hoga....aur meri gudiya tu itni rondu kab se ho gayi.
chup hio jaao sona, mein promise karta hu jo tu chahegi wahi hoga

itne mein addu k aansoo band ho gaye aur woh khilakar haste hue boli

addu - aapki gudiya rondu nahi hai bhaiya, ab aapne promise kiya hai

mein sab samaz gaya ki issne natak karke muzhse promise le liye

mein -- addu tu na bahut shaitan ho gayi hai, toh mein pyar se ek chapat uske sir par laga di

mom aur di bhi addu ki nautanki dekhkar hasne lagi

yaha room k bahar doc aur R.V.S[/color]


Doc - Rana saheb jo meine dekha mein vishwas nahi kar sakta
lagta hai aapke bete mein powers hai

R.V.S - man mein (kahi doc ne yeh baat bahar bata di toh mushkul hongi... kuch karna hoga) tabhi who bole
Doc sahab jara dheere se nahi toh koi sun lega, aur phir doc ki aankhon mein dekhkar man mein kuch bolne lage .. isse doc ka sir bhari sa hone laga

R.V.S - kya hua doc sahab aap thik toh hai na.....kya kahrahe the aap

Doc - kuch nahi rana sahab halka sa sir dard hai thiik ho jaayega .......
aur haa mein kah raha tha discharge paper kal tak mil jaaenge

(R.V.S ne aise kya kiya ....... jo doc sab bhul gaya.... )
Doc se baat karke R.V.S bete k paas aagaya

papa - uth gaye young man ab kaisa feel kar rahe ho

mein - Ab accha lag raha hai papa , (idhar udhar dekhte hue) papa Rakesh kahi dikhai nahi de raha kaha hai woh

papa - beta woh muzhse puchkar hi gaya tha, aajaayega jaldi

itne mein aawaj aai haa dost ko bada yaad kar raha hai , kabhi hume bhi yaad kar liya karo

meine darwaje par dekha toh merin dono bua aur unki family thi

inn sab k baare mein full family intro mein pata chalega

yaha visitors ka aur media walo ka aur bayan lene k liye police ka tanta laga hua hai...............yaha inhe chodte hai aur chalte hai hai isi shahr k end mein forest k paas ek farm house mein kuch dhamaka honewala hai waha

[color=rgb(209,]Roopnagar k dakshin disha mei ek ghanna jungle hai , jaha se jugle shuru hota hai waha kai resorts bane hue hai, wahi hotels aur resorts se kuch duri par ekkanth mein ek aalishan bangla hai.. jiske charo aur 20 ft unchi deeware hai aur ek bada sa gate laga hua hai ... jaha 4 gaurds hamesha[/color]
[color=rgb(209,]ak 56 se lance pahra dete hai ander ek bahut sunder park aur bich mein water fountain uski sunderta ko char chand laga rahe hai, sham k samay light se aur bhi shandar lag raha tha[/color]

[color=rgb(209,]bahar se jitna bada dikh raha hai usse jyada ander se bada hai[/color]




[color=rgb(209,]ander ek choti si drink party chal rahi hai jaha karib 10 ladke sharab aur shabab ka lutf utha rahe the
unmein se ek ... yaar Vilas aaj toh maza aagaya
Vilas (mla ka chotta ladka)- haa yaar aaj toh jasn mannane ka di hai

yeh sab mla ka ladka aur uske dost the jo kisi baat ka jasn manna rahe the....aanewali maut se anjan

Vilas - yaaro aaj khulkar piyo mere raste ka kaanta aaj ukad gaya

baki ko L1,L2 likhunga...

L1 - lekin bhai usska baap bahut powerful hai

vilas - Humne bhi kacchi goliya nahi kheli uska baap toh kya kissi ko bhi pata nahi chalega , yeh hamara kand hai
L2 - wah bhai kamal kar diya, lekin uss fulzhadi Ritu ko kyu chod diya usse le aate toh aaj maza aajaata

L3- arre bewakuf sabar se kaam le , bhai ne kuch socha hoga

Vilas - haa yaar , mere baare mein jissko pata tha, uska woh bhai toh ab nahi raha , jo mere liye kgatra ban sakta tha, uss Ritu ko ab kabhi bhi utha sakte hai

L5 -haa bhai bada uchalta tha Abhi aur woh uska dost haa kya naam tha uska...haa Rakesh itne mein hi ek jor ka dhamaka hua aur hall ka darwaja tut kar gir gaya, Waha ka security alaram baj utha aur dekhte hi dehkte uss bangle k tahkhanne se karib 100 Gaurds aadunik hatiyaro k saath vilas aur usske dosto ki security k liye unko gher kar khade ho gaye

sab tute hue door k tarf dekhte hai toh waha utha dhua chatte hi ek saaya nazar aaya

tabhi waha bhayanak ek aawaj gunji

Maut hu mein ....mahakaal ka ansh tumahara kaal hu mein....

abhi k liye itna hi.....

agla action se bharpur update raat ko
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[color=rgb(85,]Update - 6

ab tak aapne dekha hero ko hosh aagaya hai.....Aur yaha mla k farmhouse par dhamaka hua ....ab aage...

sab gaurds aur vilas &friends ne jab tute hue darwaje ki taraf dekha toh dhue mein ek saaya dikha ...aur gunji ek aawaj
tab unn gaurds k chief ne kaha

chief - kaun hai be waha, aur tum ander kaise aaye....tumahari himmat kaise hui yaha aane ki ... lagta hai tumahari maut hi tumhe yaha lekar aayi hai
tabhi saaya aage aaya (arre yeh toh Rakesh hai , lekin alag bhesh mein aankon mein maut ki shanti liye)




Rakesh (kaal)-- maut ko maut ki dhamki dete ho, aaj maut ka tandav toh yaha hoga

chief - marne wale toh tum ho yaha 100 gaurds jab goliya chalayege toh tumahare chithde ud jaayenge bacche
lekin pahele yeh batao kis bheja hai tumhe yaha

Rakesh k badle roop ko ab kaal likhunga

kaal - Vilas ki aur dekhkar ... kyu be haramjade tu marega mere maalik ko
pahele muzhse toh nipat le

Kaal ki aankon mein maut ki aag dekhkar vilas ki ruh tak kaanp gayi ..lekin phir bhi himmat juta kar bola

vilas - dekh kya rahe ho khatam kar do isse
vilas k bolne par chief ne gaurds ko ishara kiya 5 gaurds aage aaye ek saath gun lekar , lekin yeh kya jaise hi trigger dabate kaal ki aankon se nikli lal roshni ne unko jaam ka diya aur shuru hua maut ka khel
abhi chief kuch samzta uusse pahle pancho k sir dhad se alag ho gaye aur nikla khun ka fawara...... yeh scene dekhkar sabki ruh fana ho gayi

Kaal --- Ha ha ha ek bhayanak hasi k saath , lucky the yeh paanch jo itni aasan maut mili

sab uss khaufnak hassi ko sunkar kaapne lage ... phir bhi chief ne himmat karke order diya

Chief - bhundo issko sab ek saath fire karo 95 guns ek saath garji shuru hui goliyo ki baarish ...lekin yeh kya ek bhi goli Kaal ko chu nahi paayi

kaal dono haato se samurai aise ghuma raha tha ki saari goliyan talwar se takrakar girne lagi

kaal samurai chalate hue -- Ab bass bahut hua yeh khel...itna kah kar kaal ka chehra badal gaya ...ab insaani chere k badle lion ka sir ho gaya ...aur gunj uthi ek garjna..... jiski aawaj se aisi tarange nikli ki sabki guns band ho gayi
kaal k iss badle roop ko dekhkar sab ki run kaanp gayi .. kaal ne apni dono samurai upar uthayi ..toh dono gayab ho gayi pal bhar mein pahuch gaya chief k saam ne aur chief kuch sochta uske pahele .. kaal ka panja chief k chest mein aur khun se sana hua dhadkta hua dil bahar woh dhadkta dil pahuncha kaal k jabde mein aur kaal usse kga gaya
yeh drishya dekhkar sabko apni maut nazar aane lagi , vilas aur kuch log baagna chahte the lekin na jaane kausi shakti se sab k pair jaam ho gaye
ab waha sirf chikhe gunjne lagi aur charo taraf insaani jism k tukde ...2 min mein hi sab gaurds k tukde pade the ... kisi ka sir ukhad diya tha toh kisi ke haath ...kisi ka pet faad diya toh aantadiya bahar aagayi thi....
ab bache the sirf vilas aur uske dost...
yeh sab dekhkar unko ultiya honne lagai, dar k maare aage se gile aur piche se peele ho gaye.
ab kaal wapas apne warrior rup mein aaya ...
Kaal - ab bolo kya karu tumahara vilas

vilas kaapte hue badi mushkil se
muzhe chooooood dooo.... ma..i aaaafi maangta hu apne galtiyo ki mein aaapna jurm kaaa.bool karta hu

Kaal -aise nahi apna bayan record karo ...vilas apna video bannte hue saare gunah kabool karta hai, bunglow k godownse drugs aur hathiyaro ka kaam hone k baare mein bhi bataya , kitne rape aur murder kiye sab kaboola ...kaal ke mana karne par sirf Abhi par jo humla hua uske baare mein nahi bola..

Vilas --- Ab toh tumne jaise kaha maine wise hi kiya ...aaaaab tooh muzhe chod do ...

Kaal - ha ha ha ...haramjaade tum jaise kamino k liye kaal k paas kewal ek chij hai.......aur woh hai maut

issi k saath phir ek baar kaal ki samurai chamki aur pal bhar mein vilas aur uske dosto k sharir k tukde farsh par
kaal pura khun se sana hua tha apne charo taraf ek baar dekha ...phir IG aur media ko yaha ki jaankari di aur aagaya wapas apne Rakesh wale roop mein .... jisse dekhkar koi nahi kah sakta ki yeh kissi ko maar bhi sakta hai.
Tabhi Rakesh ne haath gol ghumaye aur waha ek safed roshni ka darwaja sa ban gaya ... Rakesh ussme pravesh kar gaya aur pahunch gaya hospital k chhat par ..

chat se utarkar Rakesh badh chala apne malik yani dost k room ki aur
abhi raat k 8 baj rahe the visitor time khatam hogaya tha ... saare ristedar aur friends milkar jaa chuke the .....
Ristedar Abhi k Ghar Ranamahal mein tahre the , kuch ko kal ki party ki tayari ka karya saupa gaya tha

Yaha jaise hi Rakesh Abhi k room mein jaane ko hua toh R.V.S kisi se ph ph baat karte hue bahar nikal rahe the

jaise hi unhone Rakesh ko dekha toh bole --- ek minute IG sir pks hod kijiye... arre beta Rakesh aagye chalo accha hua , Abhi thik hogaya jaao jaakar mil lo usse

Rakesh - Sorry uncle kuch kaam mein fas gaya tha aane mein der ho gayi

R.V.S -koi baat nahi beta mil lo

itna kah kar phir call attend kiya --- Haa IG sir -- kya ----- kaise

unki baatein sunkar Rakesh muskura utha kyuki woh jaanta tha ph par kya baat ho rahi hai

Jaise hi Rakesh room mein pahucha toh dekha maa ki goad mein sir rakhkar Abhi soya hai aur paas hi sofe par Ritu di aur Adira baitihi hui apne bhai ko dekh rahi hai

muzhe kuch aahat si sunai di toh meri aankein khul gayi toh saamne dekga toh Rakesh aaya tha
ussne muzhe aaram kane ka ishara kiya..
mein - arre yr ab mein bilkul thik hu kya muzhse gale bhi nahi milega.

meri baat sunkar woh mere gale lag gaya hum dono ko aise dekhkar maa aur meri bahene bhi muskura uthi

Rakesh ne maa k pair chuye aur Ritu di aur Adira se bhi mila.


aaj k liye itna hi .......
agla update kal........

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[color=rgb(41,] Update - 9

abhi tak aapne dekha.......Abhi ka garbh pravesh.....
Mahaguru Yagnesh ka aagman
Shaktiyo ka vibhajan.......
....Rana pariwar ka atit.......
ab ....aage...
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[color=rgb(85,]R.V.S apne mahal mein bane hue gupt Shivalaya mein jaakar Mahaguru k diye hue dono box rakh deta hai

iss Shivalaya ki ek khasiyat hai yaha wahi jaa sakta hai jo Rana khandan k shaktiyon ka dharak ho yaa varis ho

iss ka darwaja bhi adrisya hai....aut kewal usse hi dikhayi padta hai jo issme prevesh paa sakta ho

Yaha sthapit Shivlinga swyam Mahadev dwaara R.S.S KO diya hua hai.

innko yahi chodte hai ..... dekhte hai shaitano ki toli kya kar rahi hai
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[color=rgb(0,]yaha pataal lok mein kalasur sansaar mein aur jyaada burai failane ki yojna bana raha tha... ki achanak ..usse sakaraatmak urja ( positive energy ka aabhas hua)
ussne apni aankhien band karke bahut koshish ki urja ke srot ko janne ki, lekin asafal raha.
aakhir kaar haarkar paatal lok mein bane hue apne puja room mein ek kaale patthar k saamne pahunch gaya...jo Eblis ka pratik tha..waha usne kuch puja ki ....

K.S - mere maalik ....yeh kaisi urja hai mere maalik.....jissko mehsus karke ek darr sa mere bhiter mehsus ho raha ha...... batao maalik ...aap toh sarva shaktiman ho....aapse kya chuppa hai....

itna kahkar woh waha pahra de rahe kuch aasuro ko ishara karte hai....jo ek kanya ko baadhkar laate hai.....

kaalasur -- Ha ha ha bhayanak hasee k saath ---- Jaanta hu mere maalik bina bhog lagaaye aap nahi bataao ge

itna kahkar Kalasur(K.S) ne aasuro dwara laayi kanya k aankon mein dekha ...jisse woh vash mein ho gayi
..aur khud uss kaale patthar k aage sir zhukakar baith gayi.......fir chamka
K.S ka khadag pal mein hua uss kanya ka sir ..dhad se alag
tabhi uss paather se uta ek kaala dhua aur ek saaye mein badal gaya

K.S - jai ho mere maalik ...jai ho

Eblis - Kaalasur jo urja tumne mahsus ki ...woh mere param shatru ki hai
ladta hai woh jaldi hi aane wala hai ..

aur iss baar uske saath woh urja bhi saath hogi jisse mera bhi janam hua hai ..... isiliye mein sidhe sidhe kuch nahi kar sakta... lekin meri saari shaktiya tumahare saath hogi

lekin tum usska saamna kewal meri shaktiyon dwara nahi kar sakte ....
tumhe aur shaktiyan haasil karni padegi..

K.S - Woh kaise mere maalik

Eblis - Tumhe 18 saal tak aasuri devi
Maa Nikumbala ki kathin sadna karni padegi , tab tak paatal lok ka rajya tumahara bete sambhalega .

K.S - JO aagya mere maalik..

Lekin mahaguru k mantra shakti se K.S aur eblis nahi jaan sake ki uss mahashakti k 14 ansh 14 lok mein janm lene wale hai ..... ek toh yaha patal lok mein hi.

Eblis ki baato ka paallan karte hue K.S ne apne bade bete ko raj saup diya aur apni teeno raaniyo se milkar 18 varsh k liye band ho gaya apne sadhna kaksh mein

Intro ..of ..Kalasur Family

Kaalasur - Ebils ka pratirup

Raktika - badi rani
isse do putra Durmukhasur ( issi ko apna raaj saup gaya hai K.S) , aur Bhayaksha

Durukti - manzli raani
isski ek kanya do putra Markesh aur Raktasur , aur kanya Kankini

Madnassa - yeh sabse chotti rani jo parashakti ki parm bhakt, apne pati se chupkar sada man mein unka dhyan karti hai, K.S ko sabse pyari
abhi garbwati hui hai ( kya bata sakte ho kaun hoga iss garb mein)

Ab dekhte hai prithvilok ki taraf...
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[color=rgb(41,]Intro of Rana family ...

Rana Ranbir Singh (R.S.S)- Hero k dada jo virasat mein mili shaktiyo ka lok kalyan k liye prayog karte hai .
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[color=rgb(41,]Shushmita devi - Hero ki dadi, yeh bhi apne k sewa meh hi lagi rahti hai.
Saara Roopnagar innko Maa saman maanta hai
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[color=rgb(41,]Innki 4 Santan hui jinn mein do Ladke aur do kanya hai

Rana Vikram Singh (R.VS) - Hero k dad yeh apne pita se bhi badhkar shurveer hai ...aadhunik Vigyan aur Virasat mein mili shaktiyo ko milakar upyog karte hai...... innka vyakitwa bada rahasyamayi hai ....aage kahani mein pata chalega
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[color=rgb(41,]Naina Devi - Hero ki mom , yeh ek dum saral swabhav ki hai , Hero k garbh mein pravesh karne se ..inn mein

Rachnatmak shakti - ( kisi bhi vastu ka nirman karna) aagayi hai , lekin abhi yeh iss baat se anjaan hai... samay aane par pata chalega[/color]



[color=rgb(41,]innke teen santaan huye

Ritu - hero ki badi behan aur samriddhi sjakti ki dharak, iss k paarn hero mein baste hai, apni mom ki trah hi saral aur sunder
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[color=rgb(41,]Rana Abhinav Singh - yani Abhi hamara hero isske ...svabhav aur shaktiyo k baare mein aage pata chalega[/color]



[color=rgb(41,]Adira Singh - hero ki chotti behan aur pranshakti ki dharak
hero k pran issmein baste hai
bahut hi cute,masoom aur natkhat hai
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[color=rgb(41,]abhi k liye itna hi baaki
kal .....[/color]
 
[color=rgb(0,] Update - 10[/color]
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pichle update mein aapne dekha ...... willan family ka intro.......Rana family ka intro...
ab aage dekhte hai aur kaun kaun hai family meim......


Vinay singh - hero k chacha , innko Apne bhai ki shaktiyo k baare mein kuch nahi pata....
Rana family ka raaj sirf woh hi jaanta hai jo inn shaktiyo ka dharak ho

Yeh bahut hi kabil aur business minded hai




Shushila singh - hero ki chachi , thodi ghamandi hai lekin dil ki acchi hai



innke bhi teen santan hai

Payal - yeh badi beti jo hero k 1saal badi hai, ( innka iss kahani mein role kam hai

Shreya singh - Vinay singh ki dusri beti

Sonu singh - beta , abhi chotta hai

innke alwa Hero ki do Bua hai
1:- Sharmishtha singh
2 :- Nirali singh

ab dekhte hai hero k mom ki family

Thakur Nirmal Singh - nana ji
Laxshmi devi - Nani

inki 5 santan hui ... 3 beti aur 2 bete

Naina singh -- hero ki mom
Sunita singh - maasi
Nilima singh - chotti massi ( ritu ki hi age ki hai)

Satish singh aur Raju singh -- mama

yeh hui hero k family ki intro.....
jaise jaise kahani aage badegi ...
waise waise aur patra kahani mein shamil hote rahenge...

ab aate hai hero k janm samay.....
aaj Rana Mahal bada hi khubsurat saja hua tha , Krishna janmaasthami ka utsav jo tha... Raat k 12 baj rahe the aur .. Krishna janam puja chal raha thi ... Ritu na jaane apne maa k bade hue peth ki tarf bar bar dekhte hui kya soch rahi thi..jaise hi puja samapt hui
Naina ko pet mein dard shuru hua , mausam badalne laga...joro ki baarish shuru hu ..... kuch kuch waisa ki haal hua jaise Krishna janam k samay hua tha...... Rana sahab naina ko sambhalne lage...... Ritu apne maa ki haalat dekhkar pareshan ho gayi thi.

R.V.S ne dai maa ko bulawa bheja , Yeh mahal Old Roopnagar mein sthith
jo itna vikasit nahi hai , yaha hospital ki suvidha nahi thi ...
Naina ko room mein le jaaya gaya ...
tabhi R.V.S ke mann mein mein ek aawaj aai
putra sab ko jaldi iss room se bahar nikalo ...aawaj pehchankar Rana sahab ne wohi kiya ...tabhi waha Mahaguru pragat hue
R.V.S - Pranam Mahaguru

Maha guru - Yashashvi bhav putra, putra tumhare iss putra k janam k liye kisi daaimaa ki jarurat nahi hai....
yeh koi sadharan balak nahi hai ...tabhi mahaguru ek jadi aur yantra R.V.S ko dete hue kahte hai putra jadi se iss yantra ko innko dharan karao aur iss jadi ka jal pilao .. R.V.S NE waise hi kiya....tab mahaguru bole

Maha guru - ab bahar chalo putra, jab tak bacche ki rone ki aawaj na aate yaha koi nahi aayega

R.V.S - parantu kyu gurudev

Mahaguru - yeh divya balak 5 tatva ki shakti k saath janam lene wala hai.isska janm wahi parashakti hi karayegi jo Tridevo ki hi janani hai.

Naina ko room mein chodkar R.V.S aur Mahaguru bahar aagaye

dekhte hai waha ander kya ho raha hai

Shakti yantra se tabhi ek rosni nikli aur Naina k garbh mein jaane lagi tab naina ka sara dard pal bahar mein samapt ho gaya, aur naina behosh ho gayi..... , Tabhi garbh se 5 rang ki roshni nikalne lagi ,...aur woh panch roshni ek jagah ikkatha hui aur ussne aakar liya ek bahut hi sunder balak ka .... jo dudh mein kesar mili hui rangat
thi.. janm lete hi balak idhar udher dekhne laga...aur kisi ko na paas na paakar jor jor se rone laga

Bahar khade R.V.S ne jaise hi balak k rone ki aawaj suni toh unke aanand ki koi seema na rahi .Rana sahab ne turant daayi maa ko bhitar ki paristhiti dekhne k liye bheja , ander jaakar daimaa ne adbhut drishya dekha ..
aur sochne lagi yeh kaise sambav hai balak ka janam hua lekin na koi khun ka katra kahi dikhayi diya aur nahi naadi chedan ki jarurat padi, aur jab Daimaa ne balak ko dekha toh aur bhi chakit rah gayi....balak unki taraf dekhkar muskura raha tha...

Iss tarah hua Hamare hero ka janam

Sara Roopnagar khushiyon se sarabor ho gaya, Rana sahab ne garibo k liye apne bhadar khol rahe the

ander Naina apne pass so rahe balak ko bade prem se nihar rahi thi, tabhi ek aawaj se usska dhyan tuta

Choti Ritu - mumma yeh kuan hai itna chotta se aur kaha se aaya hai

Naina - beta yeh Bhagwan ji ne tumahare liye bhai bheja hai

Ritu - sach ...mumma kya mein isshe..haath lagau ....aale...yeh mela pyala bhai.....kitna cute hai

Naina - haa beta yaha aao

Ritu turrant nanhe bahi k paas let gayi
aur bade dhire dhire usske sir par haath pherne lagi

Ritu - maa dekho na mela bhai kaise has raha hai ..ale ale kitna cute hai na

R.V.S ne apni shakti se daaimaa ne jo kuch dekha tha usse bula diya, aur usske mann mein aisa bitha diyajaise baalak ka janm ussi k haath se hua ho

Aur fhir samay aane par Mahaguru k nirdesha anusar naamkaran sanskar hua aur naam rahka gaya......

RANA ABHINAV SINGH


Samay aage badne laga aur R.V.S ki dono santan badne lagi....
Samy k saath Ritu ka apne bhai k prati prem aur gehra hota gaya ....
woh apne nanhe bhai ka bilkul kisi maa ki tarah hi khayal rakhti thi ...
kewal School jaane k samay hi hi alag rahti thi

samay k saath aage badhne aur samaj k prati apne karya poore karne k liye
R.V.S New Roopnagar City mein shift ho gaye ......aur mahal mein rah gaye
hero k dada aur daadi....R.V.S samay samay par waha jaakar apne mata pita ka dhyan rakhte the...
Ritu k bhitar samriddhi shakti hone k kaaran din par din unka dhan aur vaibhav badhne laga.... aur dheere dheere saare desho mein unka business failne laga ... R.V.S ne apne business ki 3 desho mein main branches bannayi ..... jaha ka kaam apne Bhai behano ki shadi ke baad unhe bhej diya tha
USA ka kaam chote bhai
VINAY SINGH ko saupa gaya

Australiya ka kaam apni behan SHARMISHTHA SINGH ko saupa gaya




jinki shadi Deepak Thakur se hui
aur innki do kanyaye hui
PARI, AVYA

Japan ka kaam apni chotti behan
NIRALI SINGH ko saupa gaya

jinki shadi unhi k saath colledge mein padnewale ek anaath ladke se hui

NITIN se

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Innki teen santan
AAKANKSHA SINGH, PREETI SINGH
aur SHREYASH SINGH

abhi k liye itna hi ......
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ab tak aapne dekha .....hero ka
janam........ab aage....
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[color=rgb(41,]Samay aise hi gujarta chala gaya....aur ab nanha Abhi 5 saal ka hone wala tha......
R.V.S bhi apni dhak Bussiness lobby mein aur apne Dusre roop
( Sangharak) jo kahani mein aage dekhne ko milega k roop mein underworld k logo mein apna dar bitha chuka tha.
aise hi ek din jab R.V.S Puja mein baithe the tab unhe antarman mein Mahaguru ki aawaj aai....

Mahaguru - putra ab samay aagaya hai Abhi k janm k dusre padav ka
isiliye tumahare putra k aanewale paanhve janamdin ka utsav tumhe apne mahal mein hi manana padega

R.V.S - Aap jo kahoge wahi hoga gurudev..

Puja se uthkar R.V.S ne apni patni se iss baare mein baat ki , wahi nanha Abhi apne room mein so raha tha aur Ritu wahi baithkar apna homework kar rahi thi .....

tabhi Abhi achanak rote hue uta

Ritu - arre ky hua mere betu ko kyu ro raha hai chup ho jaao ...

Abhi - di ....di .....woh ...bahut bala sher tha di .....woh muzhe kha jaayega
.....meli talaf dekh kal hash raha tha di
itna bol kar rone laga....

Ritu - nahi betu yaha koi sher nahi hai
dekh (gale lagakar) tune sapna dekha hotga betu chup ho jaa....
dekh tu mera bahadur bhai hai na ....itna kahkar ritu k aankhon se bhi aansoo nikalne lage

apni di ki aankhon mein aansoo dekhkar ...abhi apna rona bhul gaya.

Abhi - alle meli pyali di ab aap tyu lo lahi ho, dekho mein nahi ro raha na di
ab aap bhi mat rovo

Tabhi Room ke door par knock hota hai.... Ritu jaldi se apne aur apne bhai k ansoo ponchte hue
Ritu - kaun hai , door khula hai aajaao

tabhi ek servant andar aata hai .....
chotti malkin aapki mom aapko niche bula rahi hai...
itna kahkar woh chala gaya

Abhi - di mein bhi chalunga....
thik hai bhai ......phir dono niche aajate hai
niche jaise hi Abhi apni maa ko dekhta hai toh daudkar godi mein baith jaata hai, aur maa k gaalo par ek kiss kar deta hai,
apne bete ka pyar dekhkar naina bhi Abhi ka gaal chum leti hai aur gale lagati hai ....arre mera pyara shona

R.V.S - kya baat hai beta saara pyar maa k liye..... aur humare liye kuch nahi..

Abhi - Papa bhi toh mein maa ko hi pyar karunga aapka number baad mein aayega..

Ritu - accha betu aur mera number

Abhi - arre didu aap yaha aajao na hum dono hi maa ko pyar karenge

ab Ritu bhi apni maa k paas pahunch gayi aur Naina k gaal par kiss karke baith gayi maa ko pakadkar

R.V.S - ( zhooti narajgi jatate hue)
accha ab tum teeno toh ek ho gaye ab gaon jaane ka plan cancel ,
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[color=rgb(41,]Dada - Dadi se milne ka bhi plan cancel

Abhi - Ritu kaunsa plan papa aapne toh hume bataya hi nahi

R.V.S - beta abhi humare iss nanhe Abhi ka janamdin aane wala hai toh socha issbar gaon k mahal mein sabhi rishtedaaro k saath manayenge ...

aur ab tumahari mom ko bhi jarurat hai toh woh waha kuch din rahegi jab tak nanha mehman nahi aajata

Abhi - kaun aanewala hai papa ,

R.V.S - beta tumahare saath khelne k liye ek nanhi pari aayegi

( ji haan Nanina ko abhi 8 mahine ka garbh hai)

[color=rgb(85,]ab R.V.S & family pahunch gaye gaon[/color][/color]
[color=rgb(41,][color=rgb(85,]janamdin mein honewale utsav k liye mahal ko khub sajaya gaya tha[/color][/color]

[color=rgb(41,][color=rgb(85,]RANA MAHAL --[/color][/color]








[color=rgb(41,]RanaMahal ko khub chamkaya gaya
phir aaya woh din ...jab Abhi poore 5 varsha ka hone wala tha...

Aaj poora gaon khush tha ..kyu ki R.S.S ne apne pote k janamdin ki khushi mein, phir apne bhandar gaowalo k liye khol diye

aaj pujan aur hawan ki tayari aacharya somdutta kar rahe the ... tabhi waha Mahaguru yagnesh ka bhi aagman hua..

R.V.S ne bade shradhha bhav se unka swagat kiya aur aasan par bithaya ...

Yaha Abhi apni Dai k godi mein baitha bada khush ho raha tha

Shushmita devi (Dadi)- Beta Naina tum thodi der aaram karo aaj apne lalaa ko mein apne haatho se tayyar karungi

Naina - nahi maa ji mein kar lungi abhi pujan ka bhi samay hone wala hai

Dadi - abhi Mahaguru ji ne bataya ki muhurat mein 4 hrs baaki hai

Ritu - aap kyu pareshan hoti hai dadi mein bhai ko tayar kar lungi

Dadi - arre meri pyari ladoo badi samzjdar ho gayi hai... lekin beta tum apni maa ka dhyan rakho ...mein isse tayyar kar deti hu

Abhi - Haa didu mom ko aaram karne do... Dadi muzhe tayar kar degi..
ab mein bada ho gaya hu

Maa - wah mera betu toh samazdar ho gaya

phir Abhi apne daadi k saath unke room mein chala gaya
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[color=rgb(85,]wha jaise hi Abhi pahuncha toh na jaane kyu abhi ko nind aane lagi

Abhi - Dadi muzhe bahut nind aarahi hai muzhe sona hai

Dadi - nahi betu abhi toh aapko tayar hona hai puja mein baithne k liye

Abhi - Dadi pls thodi der sone do na

Dadi ne socha abhi abhi toh bahut samay hai .....
thik hai betu so jaa thodi der...

yaha Mahaguru apne aasan par baithakar saari sthiti ka jaayja le rahe the, tabhi kuch sochkar unhone Abhi k Dada aur dadi ko bulawa bheja

mahaguru k bulawe par par Dadi ko turrant Abhi ko sota hua chod kar jaana pada

yaha patal lok mein Durmukhasur (D.S.R) aapne pita k param shatru ki khoj mein laga hua tha ....ki tabhi usse prithvi par Aur 14 loko mein ek alag urja ka aabhas hone laga.
( dhyan rahe aaj Abhi k saath saath 14 loko mein janm lene wali uski shaktiya bhi 5 varsh ki hone wali hai)

tabhi ek nanhi pari si ladki daud kar waha aajaati hai ...bhai ..bhai karte hue rote hue aati hai

D.S.R - arre kya hua meri gudiya kyu ro rahi hai...

ladki - aapko mera janamdin yaad nahi raha ajj

D.S.R - arre meri pyari gudiya nahi bhula aaj raat ko khub jasan hoga

( ji haa yeh K.S ki chotti rani ki putri jo ABHI ki hi shaktiyon mein se ek hai
jisska naam hai - MADALSA)

Yaha dharti par mahel mein Mahaguru ko andesha ho gaya ki durmukhasur Urja ka picha karte hue yaha pahunch sakta hai...toh unhone apne mantra shakti se RANAMAHAL ko ek kawach mein band diya......

yaha achanak Abhi ki nind khul jaati hai woh apne chaaro tarf dekhta hai

usse ek madhur sangeet sunayi deta hai, ausa lagta hai jaise usse koi bula raha hai......

tabhi usski nazar saamne diwar par padi .....waha achanak prakash se chamakta hua darwaja pragat hua...jo mahal mein banne hue gupt SHIVALAYA tak jaata hai......isske baare mein kewal Abhi k Dada Aur papa hi jaante the.

Abhi ko aisa laga jaise usse uss darwaje k bhiter koi pukar raha hai ...woh aage bada toh dekha waha nicche ki aur siddiya jaar rahi hai
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[color=rgb(85,]Un siddiyon se hote hue pahuch gaya Abhi waha bane gupt Shivalaya mein waha adbhut Shivlinga k darshan karte hi Abhi k mukh se mantr nikalne laga OM NAMAHA SHIVAY aur baith gaya dono haath jodkar tabhi uski nazar waha pade do box par padi jinme ek White tha aur ek red

red box se kuch tarange nikalne lagi
aur aawaj aane lagi aao mere maalik apna lo muzhe kab se aapka hi intejaar kar raha tha....Tab ABHI ne woh red box uthaya aur jaise hi khola toh ek tez laal colour ki roshni nikali waise ek energy Abhi k ander se nikli ...jab dono energy aaps mein mili toh pragat hui ek bhayankar aakriti aur phir gunji ek bhaynkar sher ki dahad..

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi....
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[color=rgb(40,] Update - 20[/color]
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ab tak aapne dekhna R.V.S ne kuch raaj Abhi k saamne khole,
Aur Abhi bhi apni training mein laga hua hai.......
Rimpy k ander dikhi urja ka kya raaz hai ......yeh aage pata chalega

abhi toh Abhi ko bahut jannana hai ...sikhna hai
Abhi tak ki powers dono A1 aur Abhi jaldi isiliye sikh paaya kyu ki woh janm se hi isske ander thi .....( bahut kathin hai dagar panghat ki)
aage raaste mein bahut kathinayia aayengi....

khair ab dekhte hai A1 kaha hai .....


Mahaguru k aashram se nikal kar A1 nikal gaya gandhmadan parvat ki aur

yaha virajte hai Sakal jagat k paalanhaar Bhagwan Badrinath

Abhi apne vayu tatva ki shaki k dwara Yaha tak toh pahuch gaya.....lekin aage ki yaatra usse paidal hi jana tha
kyuki wohi shaktiya hume jeewan mein saath deti hai jo hume kathin parishram se prapt hui ho........
aur Mahaguru ka bhi yahi nirdesh tha,
apni shaktiyo ka prayog tabhi karna jab aur koi raasta na ho....

Gandhmaadan parvat mein Narayan parvat par Bhagwan Badrinath aur chaaro taraf Barf k parvat ...kal..kal behti hui maa alaknanda ....sab kuch itna sunder aur divya tha ki yaha pahunch kar Abhi ko apne bhiter ek nayi urja aur divyata ka anubhav hua...

Waha pahuch kar Garam paani k kund mein snan kiya Aur Phir darshan karke nikal gaya Aage ki yaatra par..

Aage jab mein ..Manda gaon pahucha
kar toh waha bane mitti k ghar dekhe aur sidhe saral log.... kuch log waha aane walo ko khanne pine ki chije de rahe the
( mazedar baat yeh hai ki itni shaktiya hasil karne k baad bhi...hero ka vyavharik gyan shunya tha, usse jab woh Mahaguru se aagya lekar jaane laga tha toh unka bhi iss aur dhyan gaya, ...phir socha chalo bahari logo k sampark mein jab aayega toh apne aap hi sikh jaayega.....)

Abhi ko yeh bhi nahi pata tha ki yeh log khane ki chije aise hi nahi de rahe the bech rahe the....

aage ka haal A1 ki jubaani ...

ab muzhe bhi bhuk lagane lagi toh mein bhi ek jagah pahucha...

aur baithne k liye ek lakdi ka bench dekhkar baith gaya...

waha k log muzhe ghur ghur kar dekh rahe the ....muzhe kuch ajeeb bhi lag raha tha.....ki jab se mein yaha aaya hu aur jaha se bhi jaa raha hu log muzhe aise kyu dekh rahe hai....


maine socha ki chodo apna kaam karte hai.... maine jo admi sab ko khane pine ki chije de raha tha

Maine waha khade aadmi se jo logo ko khanne pine ki chije de rha tha usko bola.....Bhaiya muzhe bhi kuch khanne ko do... meri baat sunkar woh meri taraf ghur kar dekhne laga.....
aur hasne laga..... waha khde log bhi hasne lage ....

kyu bhai kaha se aaye ho pahle yeh toh bataao tumhe dekhkar toh aisa lag raha hai k sidhe mahabharat kaal se yaha aaye ho ...itna kah kar phir hasne laga .......tabhi waha ek bujurg vyakti aaya .....aur usne uss vyakti ko ghur ke dekha ..toh woh chup hogaya..

bujurg (Manda Gaon k Mukhiya)
- kya baat hai shambhu yahi tarika hai tumhara yaha aanewale logo k saath

kya tum bhul gaye hamre gaon ki parampara ko .....aise majak udate ho mehmano ka...

Shambhu - maaf karna Mukhiya ji lekin issne kapde hi .....

Mukhiya - bas chup ho jaao ......phir meri taraf ......aao beta mere saath aao ...
unke beta kahne mein muzhe bahut apnapan lagne laga tih chal diya mein unke saath....
ab saari baat muzhe samaj mein aagayi thi mere kapde wahi aashram k the aur baal bhi bade bade jo yaha k logo se kaafi alg the....

Mukhiya - Kaun ho beta tum ....kisi gaon ya shaher k toh lagte nahi ho,
dekho tum muzhe baata sakte ho ho sakta hai mein tumahri kuch madat kar saku.....

mein - Baba ...kya mein aapko baba kah sakta hu.....

mukhiya - kyu nahi bete jarur

mein - Baba jyada toh mein nahi bata sakta ...lekin itna hi ki mein apne Guru ki aagya se hi ...yaha par aaya hu aur muzhe aage nilkant parvat par jaana hai..

tab tak mukhiya ji ka ghar bhi aagaya tha ...jo purane jammane ka mitti se bana hua tha....

ghar mein pahuch kar unhone muzhe baithne k liye aasan diya......
arre Jaanki (mukhiya ki wife) jara dekho toh kaun aaya hai....aur haa pani aur gudh lete aana....

tabhi ek mahila paani aur gudh lekar waha aayi woh kuch udaas si lag rahi thi...

meine gudh khakar paani piya, ...
..dhnyawad maaji .....meri aawaj sunkar uhone ne meri traf dekha aur thoda muskuraya,.....maine unki aankhon mein ek alag hi udaasi dekhi

Mein - Baba maa ji ko kya hua ....yeh itni udaas kyu lag rahi hai....

Mukhiya ji - beta woh sab baad mein..

pahle tum muh haath dho lo aur apne kapde badal lo.... suno jaanki apne vishu k kapdo mein se kuch kapde le aao toh...ayr kuch khanne ka bhi prabandh ka do

Jaanki ji ne ek nazar mukiya k taraf dekha aur kuch bolna hi chaha rahi thi ki.....
mukhiya - arre aise kya dekh rahi ho jara isse dekho toh yeh bhi hamare vishu ki tarah lag raha hai...
tab unhone muzhe gaur se dekha toh unki aankhien chalak aayi....aur aage badhkar muzhe gale se lagaya ...
haa ji yeh toh kuch kuch hamre bete jaisa hi hi.....mere sir par pyar se haath pherte
hue....sirf isski naak aur aankhien kuch alag hai...aur baal bhi..

itna kahkar woh ander chali gayi

unka sneh paakar meri bhi aankhon mein aansoo aagaye kuch dhundli dhundli si tasveer dikhne lagi jasie koi mere sir par haath pherte hue sula raha hai .....tabhi mukhiya ji k awaaj se mera dhyan tuta.....
unke diye hue kapde meine pahen liye

mukhiya ji - Toh ab batao beta....tum kah rahe the ki tum apne guru ki aagya se aaye ho ....waise kya naam hai tumahare guru ka..

Mein - MAHAGURU YAGNESH

mukhiya ji ne jaise hi naam suna toh unke haath apne aap jud gaye...aur aankhol mein shradha suman aa gaye

Mukhiya --- Kya ....naam ...bataya..MAHAGURU YAGNESH....yani ki tum bhi mere guru ji k shishya ho...

mein - kya aap bhi Mahaguru ji k shishya ho...phir toh aapne unka aashram toh dekha bhi dekha hoga ...
mein wahi se aaya hu

mukhiya - nahi putra mera itna saubhagya kaha jo unka aasram dekh saku....woh toh yaha bahut pahele aaye the jab mein tumahari hi umar ka tha woh yaha kuch din vyas gufa k paas ruke toh tab unhone yogya paatra jankar muzhe Aayruved ka gyan diya tha ..

agar tumhe uhone bheja hai toh jarur koi visheh prayogen hoga.....unhone iss baat ka sanket bhi diya tha

mein - sanket kaisa ...baba

mukhiya - beta unhone muzhe ek anguthi di thi aur kaha tha samay aane par meri yeh amanat koi tumse lene aayega .....phir ander pooja room se angoothi laakar muzhe dete hai


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woh anghuthi mere haath mein aakar chamkne lagi phir sadharan si ho gai

tab tak bhojan tayar ho chuka tha .phir hume bhojan kiya....

mukhiya ji - beta ab thoda aaram kar lo
mein - Mukhiya ji aapke Bete Vishu ka naam toh maine suna hai , lekin woh kahi dikha nahi , kaha hai woh

mukhiya ji (thoda udas hote hue)
beta muzhe kuch dawai baane k liye ek jadi ki jarurat padi thi toh kareeb ek mahine pahle neelkanth parvat ki aur gaya tha tab se lauta nahi hai...
maine usse savdhan bhi kiya tha ki Uss parvat k bhitar na jaaye...kyuki jo bhi ab tak uss parvat par gaya hai woh wapas nahi aaya...

mein - aap chinta na kare mukhiya ji aapka putr aap tak pahuch jaayega yeh mere mann kah raha hai.

phir woh din meine wahi gujara Vyas Gufa ,Bhimpul, aur Saraswati nadi k udgam sthan ka darshan karne k baad so gaya
phir subah 4 baje uthkar apna nitya kram kiya aur Mukhiya ji aur maaji ki aagya lekar chal pada apne lakshya ki taraf...
raaste k sunder najaare dekhkar aise lag raha tha ki swarg ki hi yatra kar raha hu.....aise hi chalte chalte vasudhara pahunch gaya jaha 8 jal ki dharao se niranter sheetal jal bethta rahta hai....kuch der waha vishraam kiya aur chal diya neelkanth parvat ki talhati par bada hi vishal barf se dhaka hua parvat abhi waha pahunchte pahunchte sham ho gayi thi toh wahi paas gufa mein raat ko aaram kiya ....suryaasta k samay ka adbhut nazaara pura parvat sone jaisa chamk raha tha.....
dusre din jaise hi suryodaya hua toh thodi der k liye phir woh parvat chamkne laga...aur maine pahla kadam raha parvat par , ...ki tabhi hawa tez chale lagi aur charo taraf jaise dhue ka badal ne muzhe gher liya aage ka raasta muzhe dikhna band ho gaya.....abhi mein soch hi raha tha ki kaise aage badu ki tabhi woh badal aur ghana hone laga... ki tabhi mere haath ki angoothi jo Mukhiya ji ne di thi chamakne lagi aur usme se ek tez neele rang ki roshni chamki ........aur dekhte hi dekhte saara dhua jaane kaha gyab ho gaya

phir maine jaise hi agla kadam uthaya
toh aise laga jaise kisi ne muzhe uthakar fek diya......mein phir uthkar aage badne laga .......
toh aayi ek aawaj.......Ruk jaao yaha se aage mat jaao laut jao jaha se aaye ho.....

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update raat ko
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